With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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I completely disagree with

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statement.Demand for coatings and gas are increasing nowadays. There are still areas where the supplies are yet to be discovered. Giving access to those resources will deteriorate the remaining resources and there will not be anything left for our future generation. It will produce a conflict between the countries who are trying to use them.

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, grease and gas are nonrenewable resources. If we exploit those resources which are yet to be discovered for our own use there won’t be any resources left for our future generation. In the current scenario usage of grease and gas are increasing and as years pass the demand will

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increase.

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should not allow anyone to un-wrap the left resources. They should be preserved and inherited to our future generation. In some countries like India there are no resources left to give them to their lineage.

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situation aroused because the country didn’t use their resources wisely.

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, by giving the map for undiscovered resources it will raise conflicts between countries who are trying to claim them for their own demand. There are still places in

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universe which are hidden from the modern world. Those places would have a lot of undiscovered resources, by discovering them, we may lead to encroachment of those areas and it will automatically disturb the natural habitat of those places. There will

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be a quarrel between the super powers of the world in finding those places.

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quarrel may

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increase the possibility of a war. A precise example of these are the issues which are happening in countries like Iran and Iraq. To conclude, it's sometimes good not disclose some places of the world, we might save them and their resources from the hands of the people who are trying to waste them. Those grease and gas should be rightfully given to our children and grandchildren for their utilization.

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

global demand
finite resources
energy consumption
exploiting
untouched ecosystems
carbon emissions
climate change
renewable energy
sustainable energy solutions
geopolitical consequences
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With the increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In many countries are investing new technology to deal with the public. Why it is happening? Do you think it is an appropriate use of goverment money?

Nowadays there is a tendancy to relocate overseas for lucrative jobs.While a faction of people holds the notion that this movement is challanging (?)for juveniles, others argue that it is better for children.

Childood obesity is an increasing problem in Australia as many as two thirds of children are now obese. Schools have a responsilbility to monitor what their students eat and the amount of exercise they do. To what extend do you agree to this statement?