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Some people say that in our modern age, it is unnecessary to teach children about the skills of handwriting. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Handwriting is a mandatory
skill
 which has experienced criticism in recent years. A section of society
reckon
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reckons
 that in today's technological era, handwriting is a futile
skill
.
As a result
, it is not plausible to teach
this
skill
 to children. I
,
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,
however
, contradict the suggested view due to some reasons. Plethora of reasons
surround
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surrounds
 my opinion of favouring learning handwriting. The prime factor is that practicing a
skill
 develops self _esteem
of
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in
 younger children. They cannot be confident to learn alphabets until they practice writing on their own.
Secondly
, memorising the facts would be much
effective
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more effective
 if they are written. To exemplify, it is a Herculean task to learn the historical dates, mathematical expressions as well as chemical formulas.
Hence
, it would be possible only if they have expertise in writing.
Handwriting
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The handwriting
 would not only boost
self esteem
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the self esteem
 of younger
children but
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children, but
 it would
also
 help youngsters to tackle their thought process. As adolescents would have to develop handwritten notes, they would have more concentration and focus.
For instance
, it has been scientifically proven that handwriting has significant impact on the mental processes of children. Apart from
this
, children would have more control over their learning process as compared to children who learn through computer. It's mainly because computer typing has
inbuilt system
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an inbuilt system
 of spelling
correction which
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correction, which
 makes students overconfident and perhaps lead to detrimental impacts in the long run. To recapitulate, handwriting
skill
 is irreplaceable to achieve academic success as well as it boosts confidence in youngsters.
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