You are staying at your friend’s house who is traveling to another country. A recent storm damaged the house. Write a letter to your friend And say: What happened and when, What was damaged in the house, What needs to be done about it

Dear Rishi, Hope your trip is going well. I’ve some disappointing news to share, but nothing serious though. So, don’t freak out. As you might’ve heard in the news, it has been pouring heavily from four days in here. It was quite difficult to step outside to even get the groceries. The storm just got terrible
last
night and it was so loud that I barely got any sleep. I feel bad to tell you that your favourite vehicle, which was a gift from your grandmother
was slightly damages
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. Since you forgot to leave your car keys, I couldn’t park
it
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in the garage. The windows are broken and there were a few dents because of the hail storm.
Moreover
, the power supply has been cut off.
However
, I called the electricity department and they took action immediately so, you don’t need to worry about that. If you’ve car insurance, do send me a copy of that as it would be helpful to file a report. I’ll hire a mechanic to fix the damages and you can claim the insurance amount later
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their website. Enjoy your vacation. I’ll handle everything here
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until you arrive. Yours lovingly, Vijaya

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