You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

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Dear

Mr.

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Smith, I am Kritesh Patel father of Krishna who is studying in your class 7-A(Roll No. 32). I am writing

this

letter to enquire about

upcoming

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an upcoming

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school trip to New York during

month.

To begin

with,

appart

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apart

from the shared information in

parents

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meeting, I have a few questions about the trip.

First

, what is the main purpose of

this

vist

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visit

list

? I am expecting to have some learning experience

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students who are participating

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this

tour.

Furthermore

, How many days will you stay at each location? as I have few friends in

city

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the city

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who

whould

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would

like to meet her in

the

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free time, and would you allow

this

? As you are aware that Krishna is

special

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child, and she needs to follow

strict

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food

diet to maintain her health.

Although

she is willing to eat the

food

made by the school's chef, she is

alergic

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allergic

food

such

as nuts and kiwi. If you do not mind

then

I would like her to carry some homemade

food

and medicine with her. If you need any

further

information on

this

matter, please feel free to contact me on the enclosed detail. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kritesh Patel

Sun Mar 01 2020

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9Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

207 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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