You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

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Smith, I am Kritesh Patel father of Krishna who is studying in your class 7-A(Roll No. 32). I am writing

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letter to enquire about

upcoming

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an upcoming

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school trip to New York during

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month.

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with,

appart

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apart

from the shared information in

parents

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meeting, I have a few questions about the trip.

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, what is the main purpose of

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vist

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visit

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? I am expecting to have some learning experience

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students who are participating

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this

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tour.

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, How many days will you stay at each location? as I have few friends in

city

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the city

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who

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would

like to meet her in

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free time, and would you allow

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? As you are aware that Krishna is

special

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child, and she needs to follow

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food

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diet to maintain her health.

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she is willing to eat the

food

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made by the school's chef, she is

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allergic

food

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such

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as nuts and kiwi. If you do not mind

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I would like her to carry some homemade

food

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and medicine with her. If you need any

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information on

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matter, please feel free to contact me on the enclosed detail. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Kritesh Patel

Sun Mar 01 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

207 words

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You are a parent and you need information about a school trip your child is going on. Write a letter to the class teacher. In your letter • introduce yourself • explain what information you are looking for • inform the teacher about any specific needs your child has

Some people believe that it is responsibility of individual to take care of their own health and diet. Others however believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today more and more people are using mobile phone and computer. Thus, the communication ability is losing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some claim newspapers are the best means to get the most recent information because they have more influence than other forms of media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?