To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. What is your opinion on the above assumption? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Of late, the increasing influx of vehicles poses a great menace to
environment
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the environment
across the world. Many assert that
hiking oil
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hiking, oil
prices would probably eliminate some dangers to the
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
.
Nevertheless
, in my opinion,
this
idea is an ineffective one which would rather adversely affect the common people. On the one hand, it is true that the fuel price increment might reduce the usage of vehicles to some extent.
This
is because middle class people will approach public transports and other alternatives at lower costs. It may result in the control of
emission
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the emission
emissions
of smoke and gases that hugely damages the living world.
Thus
, it might prevent
further
environmental degradation.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that
this
tendency may make a trivial impact as most of the cars and vehicles are owned by the rich.
For instance
, New Delhi, the capital of India, where the government has recently amended
this
act, still stands taller in the list of highly polluted cities.
In addition
, even if the rates of oils are skyrocketing, the wealthy car owners can still afford it.
Hence
, I would say that it will hardly yield a desired outcome. I
also
believe that
this
trend would contrarily exert influence
on
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in
commoners' life. Owing to a hefty
fuel toll
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fuel, toll
, the diverse range of trades will surely be affected which would eventually rise the fare of basic necessities.
Moreover
, the factors
such
as deforestation, industrial emissions and so on primarily cause a great havoc on the natural world.
For example
, the more people vandalise the forests, the worse the effects will be. So, it is baseless to implement
this
act into society.  To conclude, as
this
is incoherent due to its negligible positive result, the governments should come up forward with constructive measures in order to prevent detrimental effects on the
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
.
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