The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
The pie charts and table
illustrates
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data
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the total value and countries (
canada
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, china, others) of fish imported to the US over 3 different years 1988, 1992 and 2000.
Overall
, the total value in billions of dollars had
an
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increase
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of
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nearly
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over the period given. Canada had a decrease
while
china had a dramatic growth. The fish
importations
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of
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other countries fluctuated. The total value started at 6.57
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of
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dollars in 1988 and it had a slight increase in 1992 with 8.52
whereas
the
last
year it stood at 10.72.
The fish
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importation to the US from Canada had the biggest percentage with 60% in 1988 and it dropped to 34% in 1992 followed by a decline to 28% in 2000. China started
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13% and it proceeded to rise to 30% in the final year.
Furthermore
, the proportion of imports relatively grew from 27% in 1988 to 42% in 2000 with
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largest
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majority of 46% in 1992.

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