It is often argued that reading books is superior to watching TV or playing games as regards children’s cognitive development. I totally agree with this point of view.
There are three most interesting ideas that I would like to share you.
Firstly
, it is “Being the beloved”. The author showed us the story of the batism of Jesus of Nazareth with the voice came from heaven that: “You are my Son, the Beloved; may favor rests on you”. Beloved is a precious gift that we are recieved from Our Lord. He created us from dust and gaves us the Spirit, The One who gives us life
with the life
as a human being and dignity above all
creatures.
Secondly
, there are four words to help us identify the movements of the Spirit in our life
, which is presented in part two of the book
, including:
Taken- to become the beloved, first of all, we have to claim that we are taken or “chosen”. When we know that we are chosen by God, we know that we have been seen as a special person. Our Lord always looks after us and bestow on us many precious gifts such
as the grace of faith or protection,... Even when we fail or are rejected by everyone, we still believe that God chose us.
Blessed- the author warning us that some time in a modern living, we are too busy to notice that we are being blessed. He also
suggested us prayer with gratitude, encouragement, affection and love.
Broken- all people are broken. We are broken by sins and we have to suffer pain, divorce, death.But the first step to healing is not a step away from the pain, but a step toward it.
And Given- we are chosen, blessed and broken so as to be given. Our greatest fulfillment lies in giving ourselves to other. We become beautiful people when we give whatever we can give such
as a smile, a hand-shake, a kiss, a word of love, a present,....especially, we are called to be given not only in life
, but in the death as well.
Thirdly
, you can easy to catch and remember the book
’s content via quotes thoughtout the book
. For example
, in the third section, you can see many difficulties to live as the beloved, and one of them is the world via the quote “The world is evil only when you become its slave” and others.
I hope that my presentation will arouse your interest and curiosity about this
book
. Trust me and try this
book
, it won't disappoint you.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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