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List some of the causes and effect of global warming offer one solution that might help slow or stop the problems associated with global warming

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In the current scenario, human activities are the main causes of global warming, particularly the massive growth in technology and humans’ lifestyles would tend to make some bad effects, which is global warming.
This
 essay is going to discuss the causes and solution. On the one hand, increasing climate changes affect
humans’
Suggestion
human
 life badly, the major sources for the global warming is burning more fossil fuel and coal for a different purpose, mainly for generating electricity, which emits a huge amount of co2 in the atmosphere consequence, the ice melting in the Arctic area as long the sea level will increase,
thus
 the small island like the Maldives will face the threat of occupied by sea water.
Additionally
, the deforestation is lead to reduce the greenhouse process, which will release
less amount
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a less amount
 of oxygen for breathing.
For example
, the research has been conducted by the world environmental organization revealed that every
year 8
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year, 8
% of trees are cut down for the humans' needs.
However
, there are ways to reduce global warming. The basic measures control the carbon dioxide emission level in the surrounding. For that government should place strict rules against the exploitation of forests.
Moreover
, the private green organizations should encourage the factories to use less harmful alternative sources as, sea waves, sunlight, wind, lightning,
furthermore
, manufacture more electric vehicles for individual usage.
For instance
, In London, German majority of the public use bicycles for their transport. In conclusion, humans' action generates more global effects that will vulnerable for citizens' well being,
therefore
, above solution would be more helpful to slow down the warning so, it is
better
Suggestion
best
 that everyone follow as their responsibility.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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