in the past when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own counytry. Nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the aow dvantages and disadvantages of this development

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A university degree
University degree
university degree
is very important for any individual for getting a good job.Now the students have more opportunities to do their higher studies abroad than the past.
This
development has both advantages and disadvantages. One of the main
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advantages
advantage
is that the students get a chance to interact with other students who are from different countries and it helps them to learn about new cultures as well as the students get exposed to new
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
methods
mehods
of teaching and
reading carefully with intent to remember
studying
stdying
.Studying in a foreign
country
enables a student to
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
becpme
self dependent as they have to do everything themselves like cooking
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,
,
finding a job etc.
This
development has disadvantages as well. If we are studying
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abroad, we
abroad we
should look after
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ourselves, but
ourselves but
if we are studying in our own
country
we get support from family and friends and can concentrate well in our academics.Another disadvantage is that many students going abroad for their higher studies make it as their home
country
.After the completion of their
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studies, they
studies they
find a job
in or at that place
there
their
and prefer to settle down in that
country
itself and
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do not
donot
come back to their homeland.
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Also, many
Also many
students may find it difficult to adapt to the new culture.
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In studying any
Studying in any
studying in any
foreign
country
has more advantages than disadvantages.Doing higher studies abroad makes a person more confident
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,
,
self dependent and
also
more
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
knowledeable
about different cultures which helps them to adapt to new environment very
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
easi;y
and quickly.

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