Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

No one could deny the fact that being contented is vital for an
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individual's
individuals
life.
This
essay will examine the reasons for why it is not easy to explain happiness and would
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analyse
analyze
the aspects that are required to reach it. On the one hand, each individual has a confined view about being happy and they require different elements in order to reach the
state
of joy. To be precise, business magnets would still have many challenges in their career, despite their higher financial status. But an ordinary man with a supporting family and an average income would still be running towards earning money believing that the true euphoria lies within filled pockets.
In addition
, some people find it easy to laugh in difficult situations, whereas it is extremely challenging to make certain people to burst out loud.
In other words
, the natural personality of a person will make it difficult to explain the
state
of being contented.
For example
, psychological problems would
also
lead to continuous
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laughter, but
laughter but
this
does not contribute to being happy.
In contrast
, even though it is tiring to define the
state
of euphoria, there are some fundamental elements that are vital for being cheerful.
Firstly
, having caring and a strong relationship is important as they would be supporting in worrying situations.
Secondly
, the financial burden is an energy draining genre that wipes out most of the joy from an individual when it is difficult to purchase the desired materials.
Finally
, the dwelling environment has to be peaceful which enables families to live in a relaxed
state
.
For example
, people living in congested areas have shown increased aggressive
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behaviour
behavior
when compared to people living in calm surroundings. In conclusion, despite the difficulties in portraying happiness, it can be achieved by strong relationships, sufficient money to
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fulfil
fulfill
the needs and a peaceful environment.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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