When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.

The technological revolution affects all countries around the world in many ways significantly. It seems that the traditional skills and the ways life used to be present have disappeared.
This
essay will discuss how the
technology
has led to
this
case and whether it is worth attempting to save people's traditional life or not.
To begin
with, there are various reasons why traditional skills no longer exist as it was many years ago. One major reason is the development of
technology
. For illustrations, modern
technology
has been used for many tasks
such
as agriculture, industries, and the machines have replaced people’s manual tasks in most cases.
Moreover
, the internet alters the way of communication dramatically;
instead
of visiting family these days,
for example
, people speak with each other over the phone or chat using social media like Facebook or Twitter. Perhaps,
that is
why the traditional skills are expiring with the demand if time and modernization. Let's move to another point in the statement: some people argue that the traditional experience shouldn't be saved. The principal reason for their opinion is that global advertising encourages everyone to buy the same products.
For instance
, people wear similar clothes, rather than traditional costumes, and eat from the same types of restaurants
such
as KFC and Mac Donald and their branches are present all over the world.
This
shows that it does not make sense to keep the traditional skills alive. To conclude,
this
essay has looked at the possible reasons of die out of traditional life,
such
as the revolution in
technology
and popularity of the internet, and
also
the reason why it is aimless to keep them alive.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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