Practice 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to the course tutor. In your letter, •describe the situation •explain why you cannot continue at this time •say what action you would like to take You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any ad
Dear Sir, Madam,
I am writing
this
letter with regards to informing you that I cannot continue my evening course which is following at your Institute of Pastry and Bakery.
I registered as a student under my name in the institute on 14th May 2024, and I am included in your evening batch. I am really happy to inform you that, I learned much more from your lectures in that short period and it is sufficient worth for me.
Therefore
, Currently, I am doing a full-time job and I promoted to Manager in my Section. In addition
, my work scope increased more than before. Therefore
, I could not spend time on that course since I will be busy with my job and I could not skip my duties since I love my job and I learned much more from there.
So, I am kindly requesting that you be able to change my course to the weekend batch, I much appreciate it.
I am kindly hoping for your immediate attention in this
regard.
Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Danushka A.Submitted by agdanush on
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task achievement
Although the purpose of the letter is clear, providing more details regarding why the increased job responsibilities make it difficult to continue the evening course would make your response stronger. Mention if it is due to the extended work hours or additional projects.
coherence cohesion
Try to ensure smoother transitions between sentences and paragraphs. This will help maintain a more logical flow of ideas. For instance, explicitly stating your promotion and how this impacts your schedule would create stronger coherence.
coherence cohesion
The letter has an appropriate greeting and closing, which follows the formal tone required for this type of correspondence.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is suitable and polite, which is appropriate for a formal letter to a course tutor.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite