The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

There is no

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denying

that today is an era of

internet

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and telecommunications. We live in

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world

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a world

the world

of mobiles, televisions, computer systems and laptops being connected to

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internet

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the internet

all around the clock. I believe having

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kind of connectivity aids us in access to

vast pool

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a vast pool

the vast pool

of knowledge for any individual and in

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essay, I will put forward my views and support why it is

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advantageous

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advantage

to have so.

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with, in

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we can browse and view

myriad

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a myriad

of topics.

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, topics including cooking, travelling, music, dance and many others are available for anyone one to teach

themselves

objective case of they

them

life skill or even enjoy. Previously, people were not having

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plethora of information content at one

place

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and so it is

great boon

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a great boon

to have at a singular

place

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as it reduces effort and time.

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, to that knowledge about

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world

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the world

such

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as what, where of any

place

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helps a new person or

traveler

a person who changes location

traveller

to see and explore the

place

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which was not possible earlier. To illustrate, using Google Maps from

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internet

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the internet

can give you details of your

near by

close at hand

nearby

locality or distant corner of

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world

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the world

just within

few clicks

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a few clicks

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, I state that the benefits of

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internet

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the internet

will continue to proliferate in coming years.

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, since

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internet

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the internet

can be

access

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accessed

by anyone and anywhere in the

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, it is being

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used for education. Today, children from rural and places which are hard to reach because of geographical barriers are learning and educated via online classes. To add to that point, there are multifarious points being free, fast and easily accessible

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a medium

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further helps

further

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helping to reduce illiteracy rate.

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, in India government has started a movement called "Digital India" which primarily focus on connecting villages to cities via latest telecommunication services. So, having

such

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initiatives is to explore all corners of

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internet

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the internet

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information powerhouse. In conclusion, I opine there are far too many advantages of having

such

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access to information pool

from

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the

internet

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Furthermore

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, all government should take

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action

step in building sustainable infrastructure for better and faster

internet

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Mar 2, 2020

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