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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

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There is no
deny
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denying
 that today is an era of
internet
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 and telecommunications. We live in
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world
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a world
the world
 of mobiles, televisions, computer systems and laptops being connected to
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internet
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the internet
 all around the clock. I believe having
such
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 kind of connectivity aids us in access to
vast pool
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a vast pool
the vast pool
 of knowledge for any individual and in
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 essay, I will put forward my views and support why it is
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an
advantageous
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advantage
 to have so.
To begin
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 with, in
internet
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 we can browse and view
myriad
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a myriad
 of topics.
For instance
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, topics including cooking, travelling, music, dance and many others are available for anyone one to teach
themselves
objective case of they
them
 life skill or even enjoy. Previously, people were not having
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 plethora of information content at one
place
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 and so it is
great boon
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a great boon
 to have at a singular
place
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 as it reduces effort and time.
In addition
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, to that knowledge about
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world
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the world
such
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 as what, where of any
place
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 helps a new person or
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
 to see and explore the
place
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 which was not possible earlier. To illustrate, using Google Maps from
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internet
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the internet
 can give you details of your
near by
close at hand
nearby
 locality or distant corner of
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world
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the world
 just within
few clicks
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a few clicks
.
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, I state that the benefits of
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internet
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the internet
 will continue to proliferate in coming years.
Secondly
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, since
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internet
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the internet
 can be
access
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accessed
 by anyone and anywhere in the
world
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, it is being
sustainably
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 used for education. Today, children from rural and places which are hard to reach because of geographical barriers are learning and educated via online classes. To add to that point, there are multifarious points being free, fast and easily accessible
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 a medium
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further helps
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 helping to reduce illiteracy rate.
For example
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, in India government has started a movement called "Digital India" which primarily focus on connecting villages to cities via latest telecommunication services. So, having
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 initiatives is to explore all corners of
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internet
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the internet
 as
a
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an
 information powerhouse. In conclusion, I opine there are far too many advantages of having
such
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 access to information pool
from
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of
 the
internet
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.
Furthermore
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, all government should take
active
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action
 step in building sustainable infrastructure for better and faster
internet
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.

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