Many countries have now banned smoking in public places. Some people feel that government should ban smoking entirely. Do you agree or disagree?

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Smoking is banned in open places in many nations at present and a large number of people consider that the ruling party should be banished smoking completely. I strongly agree with
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tendency because it
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health issues and is expensive.
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with, smoking
causes
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health issues among the population because
cigarettes
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contain
nicotine
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and drugs and it
causes
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lung
cancer
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and asthma not only in the smoker but
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in the passive smoker
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can affect smoking.
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, a person who smokes a cigarette in the smoking zone
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other people who stand near that person
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have lung
cancer
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by the passive smoker. When the authorities ban smoking completely society will be a healthy society without getting
cancer
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and asthma illness by inhaling drugs and
nicotine
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.
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, cigarette prices are more expensive than regular meals because
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contain more taxes than foodstuff. If the authorities prohibit
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completely people will not spend more money on buying these products, and
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, they have to use up
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money for other expenses.
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, in Australia, a cigarette pocket cost is $50 but a meal price is under $5. Many individuals spend a high amount on buying
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because they are addicted to inhaling
nicotine
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and drugs
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nicotine
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reduces stress and provides temporary relief but
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price is more expensive.
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, smoking should be banished entirely by the government because it
causes
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lung
cancer
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and asthma to smokers, not only active smokers but
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passive smokers;
cigarettes
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cost are more expensive because
cigarettes
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contain more taxes than a regular meal.
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, I strongly agree with
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statement that the government should be prohibited.
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