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Developments in technology are causing environmental problems. Some think the solution is for people to adjust a simpler life while others believe that technology itself can solve the problems. Discuss both views and give you opinion.

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It is undeniable that the advancement of
technology
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, it is commonly recognized that the remarkable improvement of human's living standard.
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, it
also
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 brings severe destruction towards the
environment
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 due to the unrestricted depletion and pollution.
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, it is time to discuss whether adjusting a simpler life is the only solution or the problems can be handled by
technology
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 itself.
First
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 of all, if people don'
t
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 pursue the famous brand products
such
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 as luxury cars, bags and superior apartments, they can decline the harm towards the
environment
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.
For example
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, the practice of
carpooling
a telegram sent abroad
cabling
coupling
compiling
is greatly reduced
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has greatly reduced
greatly reduces
 carbon dioxide
that is
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 emitted from burning of fossil fuels than riding personal cars. Nowadays, many housing developers
exploit
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are exploiting
 the land resources in order to build the grand residences that most of the people can'
t
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 afford, but they don'
t
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 consider the foundation of
building
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the building
a building
 which is easily destroyed by the natural disasters.
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, we don'
t
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 need to compare with others as
the simpler
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the simple
 life
have
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has
 its meaningful and valuable worth. Apart from that, some people believe that the
technology
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have
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has
 the ability to solve the environmental problems as more and more
advancedly
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 environmental friendly products are provided
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 as subways, are highly energy efficient or use sustainable energy, so that it can minimize the damage of the
environment
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.
In addition
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, the governments encourage the farmers to conduct the organic agriculture which is without using the pesticides and insecticides that are harmful to the soil. In order to maintain the fertility of lands, some organic compounds are invented as the improvement of
technology
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. In conclusion, as the human beings that live
in
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on
 the Earth, we have the responsibilities to protect and cherish our
environment
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, so that we can live in comfortable and clean situation.
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