topics: With the increased global demand for oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that, there should be more access to produce
and gas as the demand is getting increased in domestic and commercial sectors. Some persons are opposing
access to save the natural resources which are quite important. I completely agree that natural resources are crucial and mandatory to save the life of human beings and animals on the earth.
, if we will be having more access to destroy natural resources to produce
and gases,
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natural places will get shrunk, residential places will get limited, congestion will be
perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
everywhere which will lead to dangerous diseases
for instance
, Asthma and improper breathing. Very soon it will start affecting to ozone layer badly which will make the life of human being vulnerable. Society has to face the reality soon. If we will destroy the natural resources with
speed, nobody can survive in
world for the long-run.
The life
of human being is quite important than having luxurious lifestyle. Society has to take corrective actions to protect the natural resources before it will get too late.
, owing to
the availability
and gases, people are dependent on man-made
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products, for
for instance
, machinery and vehicle, children are not taking initiate to walk and
run which
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run, which
is not only
impacting to their
impacting their
physical growth but
to their mental growth as well. It is an urgency to educate everyone about the disadvantage of using machinery and vehicle. There is
a need
to organize proper seminars to educate about the importance of natural resources in our lives. In conclusion, I will highly recommend protecting natural resources and discarding the unnecessary usage of machinery and
vehicle especially
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vehicle, especially
those which are consuming
and gases, only
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
we can predict the bright and healthy future of human beings and animals.
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