The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayers' money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Given
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chart, bar
chart bar
show the information regarding to
trip
made by children aged 5-12 in one country in 1990 and 2010 to travel to and from school using different modes of
transport
. In year 1990 mostly
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
traveled
by walking, almost more than 12
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million
millions
trips
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have been arranged
has been arranged
, But in 2010
this
number suddenly declined to 6 millions
trip
. 1990 was
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the year
a year
year
in which children
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
traveled
less
Suggestion
throws
throw
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car, according
car according
to given figures in chart little more than 4
Suggestion
million
millions
trip
ware arranged, But in 2010 children mostly
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
traveled
Suggestion
by
from
car almost more than 10
Suggestion
million
millions
trips were arranged. Bus were
second
choice in 1990 after walking which was almost more than 6 million,
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however, with
however with
the passage of time it has been declined to 5
Suggestion
million
millions
. In 1990 after bus, cycling were
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the choice
choice
of most of the children to perform
trip
,
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however, in
however in
2010 it has been reached to 2
Suggestion
million
millions
. Least for
transport
modes in 1990 were walking and bus, Almost less than 6
Suggestion
million
millions
children were using it has a
transport
mode, But in 2010 children
having no beneficial use or incapable of functioning usefully
useless
use less
this
mode of
transport
as well, which has been reached to more than 2 millions.

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