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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes Do you agree or disagree

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Several people reckon that the
culture
 and character of a
person
 can be easily judged by their choice outfits. In my opinion, the statement is partially justified, dressing sense indicates the
culture
 and the living standard of a
person
, whereas, the character can't be judged by someone's appearance.
To
Suggestion
Two
 began, the world has become a global village, people are emigrating from different regions and mixing with various cultures, while carrying their native traditional dressing sense with them.
Hence
, a variety of religious people sometimes, seen wearing their cultural dresses and by seeing that it's easy to speculate
,
Accept space
,
what
culture
 and religion the individual belongs.
For example
, a
person
 wearing
Turban
Suggestion
a turban
a Turban
 is the symbol of Sikhism and the Punjabi
culture
 of Punjab
,
Accept space
,
India.
Therefore
, people wearing Hijabs and pajamas are considered to be Muslims.
Furthermore
, the cultural dresses tell that how much they love their
culture
 and how good they are at preserving it while, the westernization is taking over. Clothing
also
 represents the standard of living among the community.
However
, the prospective of judging a personality by their appearance is not appropriate. Often, people are misunderstood by their sense of clothing.
For instance
, a well dressed and good looking applicant during an interview is always not the right candidate for the position and in order, to pick the right
person
, the interviewers need to ask questions.
Furthermore
, observing people by their appearance is ethically wrong and discriminating as well. In conclusion, I firmly believe that with the choice of clothing reveals about the standard of living of an individual and
also
 helps to identify their
culture
, but it
does't
does not
doesn't
does
 show the character.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • attire
  • fashion trends
  • individuality
  • first impressions
  • designer labels
  • social status
  • cultural appropriation
  • dress codes
  • traditional garments
  • sartorial choices
  • symbolism in clothing
  • cultural identity
  • expression of self
  • global fashion industry
  • cultural integration
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