Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, it seems that more people are migrating to other countries than ever before.
This
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Raise
raise
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certain questions
a certain question
the certain question
certain question
about the integration of newcomers into
society
.
Although
there are
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Valid
valid
arguments to the contrary, in
this
paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of
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Immigrants
immigrants
to adapt to accepted rules of
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
behavior
in their adopted
country
, both written and
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Unwritten
unwritten
. The reasons for
this
are twofold.
Firstly
, it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted
country
for
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The
the
sake of social order. Imagine the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the
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Same
same
side of the road. It is,
therefore
, necessary for all-immigrants to ensure that they observe
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The
the
law in their new
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country, regardless
country regardless
of any differences to laws in their home
country
. Two
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Further
further
instances of practices which are permitted in some
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countries, but
countries but
prohibited in others
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Are
are
the possession of firearms and gambling.
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Secondly, and
Secondly and
more importantly, though, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential
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That
that
newcomers respect the social norms of their adopted
country
. Of course, having a
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Mixture
mixture
of different cultures and traditions gives a
country
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
colour
color
and vibrancy;
however
, I
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Would
would
contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a
society
by alienating people
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From
from
each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas differences have a
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Tendency
tendency
to divide. A strong
society
is a homogenous
society
with shared values and goals. By way of conclusion, I believe that
this
issue is likely to become even more important in the
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Future
future
as border between countries become increasingly blurred. It,
therefore
, demands out
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Further
further
consideration.

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