Nowadays, more people are migrating to other countries than ever before. In order to become integrated into society in their adopted countries, immigrants should abandon their old ways and adapt to local customs and codes of behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, it seems that more people are migrating to other countries than ever before.

This

raise

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Raise

certain question

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certain questions

a certain question

the certain question

about the integration of newcomers into

society

.

Although

there are

valid

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Valid

arguments to the contrary, in

this

paper I will argue that it is the responsibility of

immigrants

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Immigrants

to adapt to accepted rules of

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

in their adopted

country

, both written and

unwritten

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Unwritten

. The reasons for

this

are twofold.

Firstly

, it is vitally important that newcomers observe the laws of their adopted

country

for

the

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The

sake of social order. Imagine the chaos that would ensure if people refused to drive on the

same

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side of the road. It is,

therefore

, necessary for all-immigrants to ensure that they observe

the

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The

law in their new

country regardless

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country, regardless

of any differences to laws in their home

country

. Two

further

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Further

instances of practices which are permitted in some

countries but

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countries, but

prohibited in others

are

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Are

the possession of firearms and gambling.

Secondly and

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Secondly, and

more importantly, though, in order to maintain societal cohesion it is essential

that

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That

newcomers respect the social norms of their adopted

country

. Of course, having a

mixture

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Mixture

of different cultures and traditions gives a

country

color

a flag that shows its nationality

colours

colour

and vibrancy;

however

, I

would

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Would

contend that too much cultural diversity undermines a

society

by alienating people

from

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From

each other. It is my belief that similarities unite people, whereas differences have a

tendency

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Tendency

to divide. A strong

society

is a homogenous

society

with shared values and goals. By way of conclusion, I believe that

this

issue is likely to become even more important in the

future

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Future

as border between countries become increasingly blurred. It,

therefore

, demands out

further

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Further

consideration.