Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

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It is a fact that several groups of people prefer not to consume any kinds of
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and
fish
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, as they believe that being vegetarian bring many benefits for their health and for the world as a whole. To a certain extent, I would agree with the opinion, but I think that people should
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consume
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and
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in a proportional portion as they contain rich ingredients that are needed by
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the human’s body
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. For a number of reasons, some people choose not to eat
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or
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.
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, it is believed that several types of meats and
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contain fats which are considered as unhealthy for the human’s
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. People who consume those kinds of
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or
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have a higher risk of cardiovascular diseases
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as heart attack or cholesterol.
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, as the demand for
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and
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increases, it would have a negative impact on the environment. The increasing number of farming activities would require bigger areas, which might reduce the number of forest areas.  And
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with over-exploitation of fishing activities, several types of fishes would extinct and it would make the sea ecosystem become imbalance.
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, many food scientists have found out that there are several types of vitamins and proteins that could only be obtained from
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and
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. For examples, Salmon
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generates a certain type of oils which are beneficial for our blood circulation process. And
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, red
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is needed as the source of nutrition for human’s brain.
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, the main problem of those who consume
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and
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is that most of them consume the food in an inappropriate portion. As a consequence, many of them have problems with obesity or
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diabetes
. In conclusion, it is true that some people believe that being a vegetarian is healthier than
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consumer, and it would
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give positive effect to the environment. To a certain point, I would agree with it, but meats and
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contain certain types of nutrition that are needed by our
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. I do believe that if we could balance the consumption of
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,
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and vegetable, it would make our
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become healthier than the vegetarian.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Plant-based diet
  • Chronic diseases
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Deforestation
  • Water consumption
  • Mitigate climate change
  • Natural resources
  • Animal welfare
  • Humane and ethical choice
  • Healthcare costs
  • Sustainable farming
  • Legumes
  • Fruits and vegetables
  • Vegetarian
  • Vegan
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