Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do up and community work to what extent do you agree? Instead of being put behind bars.

Nowadays, There are many prisoners locked down behind the bars and left idle while taking their punishment period.

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, many of them could spend their free time on the social

service

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to atone their sin while waiting for their freedom. From my point of view, These prisoners with a light

crime

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or a few years of jailing should be

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allowed

to

service

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the community. Exploring the benefits and losses of applying the

service

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task for these captives will prove

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.

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of all, These people could relieve their

bordom

the feeling of being bored by something tedious

boredom

bottom

with these

activitys

any specific behavior

activities

activity

activists

while taking the punishment.

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, many nations had been applied a lot of

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tasks

,

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as, the sewer cleaning, the pedestrian path paving, or some farming job that could be a

service

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to public and can

provided

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provide

a cheap

labor

a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages

labour

to help

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with

many troublesome tasks. Even so, they need to be monitored to avoid the risk of escaping or the risk to cause any damage to

surrounding

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the surrounding

.

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, these

presioners

a person who is confined; especially a prisoner of war

prisoners

of a light

crime

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or a few years of penalty left should be the ideal target so as to have less reason to escape. On the one hand, their

service

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might

provided

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provide

a better image for many post-prisoners. As many of them were going to

encountering

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be encountering

encounter

many hardships or struggling to get a job for living in the future,

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, many American post-prisoner repeat their

crime

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because they have a hard time to find any job. In order to solve these problems, some countries

alloweded

make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen

allowed

them to atone their sin with many

type

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types

of community works while they are taking their punishment.

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Nonetheless

,

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method was working for many

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celebrities, but

less effective on the other common captives. By

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I mean, they have the right to have a chance to redeem for their

crime

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and

also

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have the right to improve their image for their future being. In conclusion, these

guity

responsible for or chargeable with a reprehensible act

guilty

men could be more useful with their duties

instate

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in state

of remaining idle behind those bars. It

can be accept

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can accept

can be accepted

that they should spend their jail period on many social services with a condition of low escaping risk. As for the

society

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societal

benefits,

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approach could be better in

longterm

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the long term

long term

as they could have a chance to turn over a new leaf with a better life.