Some say you should always marry for love; others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Nowadays,
money
is one of the most significant materials in our lives.
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For
To
many people, it is appropriate to marry for
money
rather than
love
.
However
, I believe that
both
love
and
money
should be
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bounced together
bounce together
bouncetogether
in any marriages. Certainly,
money
is an important part in our lives. It is hard for any persons to accept a partner which* does not have
money
or at least a job to take care of future family.
Hence
, said “marry for
money
also
has
the thing named or in question
it
its
right in some extent.
However
,
love
should be the root of any marriages.
Firstly
, it is because
love
is
such
a glue to connect two persons which have their own lives, become one. So, they can share each other’s the sadness, happiness to overcome any difficulties in daily lives.
Moreover
,
love
makes people growing up because they do not only have
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a responsibility
responsibility
to themselves, but
also
to their partners as well.
That is
why marrying with
love
is always encouraged. In my opinion, I think that
both
love
and
money
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are
is
both
necessary. Marriage relying on
money
would be rapidly disintegrated when unfortunately the
money
is
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running
run
out. In contrary*, marriage relying on
love
would sometimes come to end when they could not earn
money
to carry out family,
such
as paying bills, buying food, etc.
Therefore
,
love
and
money
should stand together in marriage even though their contribution could be unbalanced. In conclusion, as we have seen, marriage without either
money
or
love
would come to an unhappy
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end
ending
. So I believe that they
both
have their own contribution to a merry family.

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