News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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scandal news.
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show their products in the most popular
mass
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way they can increase their sells and fame.
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for what in the
next
election they can vote aware. Actually, I think that everything is not bad news in
mass
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achievement
chieve.
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, the people in general don’t remember good things for a long time. If the press only would show good things, probably would be falsifying the reality, because if we are realistic, in the world often take place more thing b
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