News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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good news.

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a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

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whatever the people want to read, watch or listen, and that in general a

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scandal news.

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a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements

newspapers

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surviving

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show their products in the most popular

mass

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way they can increase their sells and fame.

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the truth

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achievement

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, the people in general don’t remember good things for a long time. If the press only would show good things, probably would be falsifying the reality, because if we are realistic, in the world often take place more thing b

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worse

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Demographics
Engagement
Relevance
Urgency
Natural disasters
Political upheavals
Public health concerns
Advertising revenue
Sponsorship deals
Market competition
Editorial policies
Censorship
Newsworthy
Desensitization
Bad news fatigue
Negativity bias
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Fully explain your ideas

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