Nowadays water-borne diseases are becoming common. Give causes and solutions.

Suggestion
Waterborne
Water-borne
diseases are one of the major
give rise to; cause to happen or occur, not always intentionally
causes
cause
caues
of
Suggestion
the high mortality rate
high mortality rate
all over the world.
This
essay will explore the reasons and
Accept space
,
,
how through awareness campaigns
Accept space
,
,
and up
the period of time during which something continues
duration
gruation
of pipelines.
Suggestion
Firstly
firstly
, one main reason
Suggestion
uses
is used
mixed polluted water for
Accept comma addition
drinking, whereas
drinking whereas
all
relating to or used in chemistry
chemical
chemicals
chemically
chimical
water mixed in
Suggestion
the sea
a sea
sea
and near
waste matter carried away in sewers or drains
sewerage
sewage
sewerge
systems that create
this
type of
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
dangers
diseases.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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