some people think that scientists experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human life to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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is a conventional
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assuring
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product's
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safety
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the
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industries. So far it has been very helpful in science's development. It may be
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some important product
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dealt
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opinions for and against
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other
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which
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we can
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products
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safety
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which had a minimum error so far. Especially in human health issues
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industry using
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now and scholars believe that animal's body
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after
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helpes
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from
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products
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side effects.
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animals
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safety
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. Critics believe that because
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are alive, definitely they suffer from
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of experiments and we have no right to endanger the
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of
animals
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and these experiments should be
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may have not exact results and
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produce new
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serious problems. in
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humans
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and
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animals
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life is important. it is not easy to decide about any of them but in my opinion, there is no need to
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animals
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for testing all
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of
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and we can
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those just for essential
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as drugs that have many serious impacts on human health.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Animal testing
  • Laboratory experiments
  • Safety and efficacy
  • Ethical concerns
  • Moral responsibility
  • In vitro testing
  • Computer modeling
  • Human reactions
  • Dependence on animals
  • Humane treatment
  • 3Rs principle (Replacement, Reduction, Refinement)
  • Reliable method
  • Innovative methods
  • Sustainable research practices
  • Animal experimentation
  • Data crucial
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