There seems to be an increasing number of serious crimes being committed each year. While some think that the best way is to use the death penalty as a deterrent, many people believe that other measures will be needed. Discuss both sides of view.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inform you that I want to join french speaking classes to improve my skills from your centre. I saw an advertisement on the public square market notice board that you have taught
foreign language course
a foreign language course
. I am Navjot
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
and right-now, I am working in
manulife corporation company
the Manulife corporation company
Manulife corporation company
a Manulife corporation company
. In my profession, I have to deal with many different
culture people
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culture, people
in which the majority of the people are from french speakers. Sometimes, it is very hard to understand what they are saying. Because of
, I feel disgrace and stuck my position on the same level. I just want to know that how long the duration of
language class and
, want to know what are the schedule and timing. I would like to prefer at evening time because I am busy during the
day time
the time after sunrise and before sunset while it is light outside
. Please send me all the details on my email: [email protected]
I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Navjot

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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