Advertising discourages us from being different individuals by making us all want to be and to look the same.

In today's globalized urbanised and the over-populated world, more and more individuals are purchasing own choice of things from supermarkets and online with the help of advertisement. It has been suggested that advertisement m
ake
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makes
life easier than in the past. I partially agree with the idea, and In
this
essay I will provide some contentious argument in favour to support my overall opinion. Generally speaking, perhaps the most compelling reason why advert is significant.
This
is because it tells them, when new thing comes i
n
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on
the market and
also
inform how much price
this
thing.
This
means that they can easily purchase personal items from shops and online. The result of
this
phenomenon could be that people will spend less energy in order to s
eeking
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seek
those things. A
further
point in favour of
this
idea might be that it is a key source of time effective. Unless masses see adverts, they would spend more time to buy goods. On the flip side, there are several negative effects of advertisement on people who are living below the red line.
Firstly
, when poor individuals to see expensive things on a
dvert,
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the advert
an advert
adverts
they c
an not
can not
cannot
afford it.
As a result
, they will feel lonely, isolated and alienated, which in turn leads to personal problems, like as depression and alcoholism. The decision as to whether companies should not put sign boards in every corner of the streets must be seen in the context of the entire society. To sum up, Buying goods is a topic which is very relevant to the contemporary society.
However
, I believe quite strongly that advertising has become an industry and
also
the b
ack bone
a central cohesive source of support and stability
backbone
of the world economies. If g
overnment focus
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the government focus
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of
these companies, it will be better for poor generations.

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