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Writing Samples
Band 8

1.You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter oGive details of your visit to the restaurant oExplain the reason for the celebration oSay what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Mr Smith The reason I am writing to you is to tell you my impressions of your restaurant.
To begin
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 with, my friends and I wanted to go to
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a good
 restaurant together, so we started to look for the best place for
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 occasion, and it was yours. When we arrived there were so stunningly beautiful decorations everywhere. Some roses, tulips and hydrangeas around the door, on the table and even on the ceiling.
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, the main reason for our little celebration was my high school graduation. We contacted your manager to ask him to help us with the menu and decorations. The manager organised a meeting and we had a discussion.
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, everything was done perfectly.
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, we had one problem because the waiter brought fish, which no one eats,
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 of meat. I had a brief pleasant talk with him and it was quickly replaced with our chosen dish.
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, the dishes and the cocktails were delicious.
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 there were a lot of people, it was comfortable to speak and listen to the live music.
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, I want to thank you for
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 to the work stuff and flawless service. Yours faithfully, Kseniia

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grammar and accuracy
To enhance your letter, consider proofreading to correct minor spelling or grammatical errors.
elaboration and detail
For increased impact, you might add more specific compliments or suggestions on how the restaurant could further improve, adding depth to your feedback.
coherence
Effective use of paragraphs to structure the letter clearly.
tone
The letter effectively communicates gratitude and appreciation, creating a positive tone.
content and details
Good detailing about the occasion and specific aspects of the service that were impressive.
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