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In many Countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of Crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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Lack of skilled workers and limited choices made people of the previous generation skilled in stitches or fixing the household things. The easy accessibility of skilled workers, busy schedule, and availability of alternative products restricts a person to learn new skills.
To begin
 with, nowadays, professional people who have done training or acquired knowledge of stitching or repairing the households things are available at a minimal cost.
For instance
, a person does not have to learn tailoring skills if they want to stitch as per their choice.
Instead
, they can purchase a piece of fabric and give it to a tailor.
Moreover
, they can save time and money by purchasing ready made clothes. In stores, the products are available at an economical price due to the competitive market. Today's generation has a busy schedule,
hence
, they do not have the intention to learn the skills.
Secondly
, as I live in a developing country, the majority of people are of the working-class.
Therefore
, they do not have time to acquire
such
 skills. They prefer to hire a skilled individual to do the household maintenance work.
Additionally
, people tend to do online shopping, as it is more convenient, have options to choose from different varieties and time-saving.
For instance
, a person can use an app to choose clothes which have options and varieties.
Moreover
, they can use the promo code to avail discounts on their purchase. In conclusion, as the tailoring and repairing skills have become professional work, people are not willing to learn these skills,
as a result
, those skills are vanishing.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • economic disparity
  • propensity
  • recidivism
  • deterrent
  • rehabilitative
  • judicial system
  • corruption
  • socioeconomic
  • alienation
  • stigmatization
  • decriminalization
  • enforcement
  • gentrification
  • preemptive measures
  • intervention strategies
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