Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Now in these days it has become very important to use these types of gadgets who take care of our environment, things or people in the absence of us. With the help of using a tracing tool it has become very easy to locate people and to find criminals. We are
also
using
CCTV
cameras to follow people. We can see that at all the public places cameras are installed to watch the activities of the people. Whenever any accident will happen on the road,
then
the video footage of
CCTV
has been checked and chased the faulty people. Most of the time I have seen that it has been written in every public place to aware the people about the
CCTV
cameras, but some time still people are not aware that they are being chased by the cameras. Almost in every situation all the people are aware that wherever they are being chased or not. In some cases, where people are using these tools in the wrong way,
then
only in that case they are unaware about that. I strongly agreed that these are so many benefits of using the technology, which was has been developed to monitor the people. We can catch the thieves with the help of location and footage. We can
also
claim our lost item.
For example
, if we placed a mobile phone in a public place and a
CCTV
camera is installed over there. Suddenly you lost your phone and you can check on the
cctv
Suggestion
CCTV
cameras that who has stolen your phone.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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