People now spend more and more time at home than in the past. What are the reasons for this development and what its effects on people and society.

Now in a day, I think all the people are busy at their families as they find lots of things to do. They are using techniques to do some extra task at their places. In the earlier scenario peoples were going to market to purchase some material. Now they are shopping online they don’t need to go to the market. They find it very convenient. Most of their day is being eaten by the mobile phone. Social networking sites and WhatsApp groups are the most common reason that they are spending their life at the place inside. With these reasons they are going anywhere. They are not meeting with their relatives. They are not given time to their children. In the past days, people spent their time with their friends, neighbours, relatives,
then
the soft relations will be made among them.
For example
, if I wish happy birthday to my friend on WhatsApp group
then
he will not be so happy. He will just ignore it. With the help of
this
growth people are not worried about anyone. If they are not going to the public,
then
nobody will know about the each other. It is very important to meet people personally. We should go their places to enjoy every moment. At
last
I would like to say that technology has eaten everything like relations, care, meetings etc.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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