You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the service.

Dear Sir or Madam, I, Anmol Gupta, one of your customers, am writing
this
letter with regard to my recent experience at your restaurant in Mumbai. My friends and I were greatly pleased with the food and services offered to us during our visit and would like to take
this
opportunity to send out appreciation. I,
along with
my husband and 10 other friends, had the pleasure
to eat
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at your restaurant on the 3rd of July on the occasion of our First Wedding Anniversary. We had already received multiple recommendations for
this
place and decided to give it a try for
this
celebration. We were amazed at the beautiful aesthetics, finger-licking food, impressive hygiene and awestruck hospitality that we were provisioned during
this
celebration. What impressed me the most was the chef's willingness to replace one of our dishes that appeared spicier than expected. Both I and my husband are now big fans of your restaurant and would make sure to recommend it to our friends and family. Your Satisfied Customer, Anmol
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Task Achievement
Consider expanding on specific examples of the good service you experienced to add depth to your letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
To enhance coherence, you might include transitions or connectors between your paragraphs for smoother flow.
Logical Structure
Your structured format, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion, effectively conveyed your message.
Complete Response
The personal touch in mentioning the occasion of your visit and the overall satisfaction makes the letter engaging and sincere.
Greeting & Closing
Your formal greeting and closing are appropriate for the context of writing to a restaurant manager, demonstrating respect and gratitude.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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