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The advent of the internet has made it possible for people to work from home. Do you feel this working agreement has more advantages or disadvantages question mark

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Technology has made a new World now a days and it has made those things possible which were not possible some decades ago.By, introducing, it. Everyone can do office job from their homes and it can be proved very beneficial for individuals.I personally feel that
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 development has more merits than its demerits. There are some major benefits to follow
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 trend.By following
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 development people can save their fare expenses and long hour they spend on commuting and the time can be spent on doing domestic or job work.The major advantage of it, is for female workers.In the past, they could not do extra time at work place because they had to do domestic works. While, in the present, every white collar job holder woman can do service anytime as they want because they have full freedom in their homes.
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, in a city of Finland due to
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 development, almost 60% sexual harassment crimes against women decreased. In
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 way, it can be proved very beneficial for individuals.
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, it has some demerits too.
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 may people lazier and can ruin their time management towards the work because at home because there will be nobody to pressurise them 1for performing the duties fast enough (
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 as managers or supervisors).To exemplify
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, the productivity of a multinational company was less when they introduced
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 method. To conclude, in my opinion,
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 trend is very supportive for individuals or reduce crime rate against females;
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, I think that
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 modern practice has more positive effects than negative ones.
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, it is dangerous for the success or productivity of a company.
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