Young people are leaving their homes from rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Students living in rural areas often seen to move to cities to study or work. The life in rural areas is so slow, people are unaware of new technology and its benefits. The education system is not good too, even though there are many government schools in the villages.
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essay will discuss the reasons of migration of young people from rural areas to the urban areas. According to me, the main reason of migration is lack of resources in the villages. As soon as, the students complete their high school, they migrate to the cities to complete their graduation as all the good universities have their campuses in the urban areas. Not only the universities, but
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all the companies have their offices in the cities. There are better hospitals in the urban areas as compared to that in the villages. There are so many advantages of migrating to a city. They will be able to receive proper education, which will benefit them in their entire life. After graduating, all the students want to have a job with a good salary so that they can experience a better lifestyle. They will be able to support their families financially and help the other young people in their work or studies. In conclusion,

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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