The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
The table illustrates the percentage of students who went to four types of secondary school from 2000 until 2009. It is evident that in 2000, the voluntary-controlled
schools
had the biggest share in the mentioned year. In 2005, voluntary-controlled
schools
and
community
schools
were approximately
dominant
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types. In 2009,
community
schools
by far were the biggest portion
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to the other three types. In 2000, specialist
schools
have the least share with 12 % and we can see the same percentage for
community
schools
.
On the other hand
, voluntary
schools
,
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possessed the largest portion with 52 % and grammar
schools
were 24 % in the figure. In 2008, specialist
schools
stay relatively the same around 11 %
while
grammar
schools
and
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schools
saw a dramatic decline
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19 % and 38% respectively.
Community
schools
rose significantly to 32%. In 2009, grammar
schools
and
voluntary – controlled
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voluntary–controlled
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schools
followed the same pattern
in
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2008
,
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and declined
however
community
schools
continued
its
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upward trend and rose to 58%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, community with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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