The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.
The table illustrates the percentage of students who went to four types of secondary school from 2000 until 2009.
It is evident that in 2000, the voluntary-controlled
schools
had the biggest share in the mentioned year. In 2005, voluntary-controlled schools
and community
schools
were approximately dominant
types. In 2009, Correct article usage
the dominant
community
schools
by far were the biggest portion compare
to the other three types.
In 2000, specialist Wrong verb form
compared
schools
have the least share with 12 % and we can see the same percentage for community
schools
. On the other hand
, voluntary schools
,
possessed the largest portion with 52 % and grammar Remove the comma
apply
schools
were 24 % in the figure.
In 2008, specialist schools
stay relatively the same around 11 % while
grammar schools
and voluntary- controlled
Correct your spelling
voluntary-controlled
schools
saw a dramatic decline for
19 % and 38% respectively. Change preposition
of
Community
schools
rose significantly to 32%.
In 2009, grammar schools
and voluntary – controlled
Correct your spelling
voluntary–controlled
schools
followed the same pattern in
2008Change preposition
apply
,
and declined Remove the comma
apply
however
community
schools
continued its
upward trend and rose to 58%.Correct pronoun usage
their
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