Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as unsatisfactory job and shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and state your opinion.

Unfavourable conditions like financial issues and
unfulfilling
jobs are the common problems by which majority of the individuals are affected these days. As believed by many that we should learn to live with it,
however
, others are of the opinion that constant attempts should be done to improve the circumstances. Both views and opinions will be stated in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the supporting examples.
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Large sections
A large section
The large section
of society is confronting these difficulties,
nonetheless
, some people just accept their standard of living. They think that it is their faith and if
any efforts
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any, efforts
will be made to come out of
this
situation, it will go in vain.
For example
, it is seen that almost 90% of the candidates seeking a place to work take the
first
job they get with meagre salary. They do not strive to wait for the best opportunity. I feel that these people have low
moral
a state of individual psychological well-being based upon a sense of confidence and usefulness and purpose
morale
and they are
unconfident
about their capabilities. They have accepted
this
lifestyle, probably
of
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by
from
the fact that it had been
prolonging
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prolonged
for too long. It seems inevitable to most that their way of living can never be raised,
therefore
, motivational events ought to organised to boost their
spirit
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spirits
.
On the other hand
, some of the beings are quite zealous and career oriented. They cannot afford to spend their life in misery. They reckon that if they work-hard and be patient, the current status can be easily uplifted.
For instance
,
their
in or at that place
there
are many legends who lived in poverty are now surrounded with luxuries. There achievements are laudable which is entirely based on perseverance and diligence. I personally suggest, if you are willing to accomplish something, it certainly can be attained sooner or later.
That is
why inspired people tend to reach the desired
pinnacle they
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pinnacle, they
aim for,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
because they believe in themselves. To summarise, self growth leads to
development
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the development
of
whole nation
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the whole nation
whole nations
a whole nation
. It is the mindset of people and their attitude towards what they want from life. Mankind can have a secure future only
then
when he longs for.

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