With an increasing population communicating via the internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

It is
certianly
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
true that, the advancement of
techonlogy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
has huge impact on the people interaction in these days. I totally agree with
this
statement and will discuss the reasons in upcoming paragraph. To embark with
,
Accept space
,
the daily interaction of the human beings
are becoming
Suggestion
is becoming
becomes
less
day
by
day
, due the huge amount usage of
electornic
of or relating to electronics; concerned with or using devices that operate on principles governing the behavior of electrons
electronic
gagdets
a device or control that is very useful for a particular job
gadgets
.
Accept space
.
To be more precise, in
these
plural of that
those
days people love to spend
there
of them or themselves
their
time on the internet rather to go outside
,
Accept space
,
which is dominating the interaction of people. Along with people,
advancement
Suggestion
advanced
technology introduced many social
sities
the piece of land on which something is located (or is to be located)
sites
for the communication
,
Accept space
,
so people prefer to communicate with
there
of them or themselves
their
friend
Suggestion
friends
through these sites.
For example
, the
facebook
Suggestion
Facebook
owner making millions from his website, because
number
Suggestion
the number
of
user
Suggestion
users
increasing
day
by
day
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
these internet pack
give
Suggestion
gives
more discount and deal to the people
,
Accept space
,
so they can easily attract towards to these
facility
Suggestion
facilities
.
For example
, In
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
relaince
certainty based on past experience
reliance
offering the three month free internet pack to
thier
of them or themselves
their
three
new consumer or human beings like to buy
this
. Along with
this
, busy life
also
has another issue of
this
development, in
this
era people have
busy schedule
Suggestion
a busy schedule
busy schedules
,
Accept space
,
so they
do not getting
Suggestion
don't get
do not get
aren't getting
are not getting
haven't got
have not got
have not gotten
time to spend with friends and family. Due to
this
they
perfer
like better; value more highly
prefer
to communicate with
friend
Suggestion
a friend
friends
through the
soacial
relating to human society and its members
social
sites. At the end,
this
development is making
huge neagtive impact
Suggestion
a huge negative impact
huge negative impact
on the daily communication
,
Accept space
,
people should have to spend
there
of them or themselves
their
lesiure
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
lesser
time with
there
of them or themselves
their
family and
friend
Suggestion
friends
to make strong
realtion
(chemistry) a process in which one or more substances are changed into others
reaction
relation
aeration
.

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