Do you think that technological advancement has brought more harm than good? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Nowadays, the advancement of technology is considered to affect people’s daily life by many factors. I believe the existence of technological advances cause both advantages and disadvantages.
The technological advancement can make people to depend on it. It helps people in working or to communicate with others.
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, people will certainly bring their mobile phones whenever they go to call and text or Linking Words
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with others. By bringing their gadget or other electronic devices, people do not need to stay at their Use synonyms
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they can Linking Words
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using their electronic devices. Electronic devices help people with their job more easily and conveniently.
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electronic devices too often and really depends on it. Use synonyms
Firstly
, many children spends most of their time on using a mobile phone to play video games which spoil their eyes, in result, many of them Linking Words
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spectacles at a young age. Use synonyms
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, people who get used with electronic devices will be lazy and constantly making Linking Words
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of their phone in every purpose. Use synonyms
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, they would prefer to Linking Words
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their electronic devices to communicate rather than meet face-to-face. Electronic devices could make a bad habit for people if they misuse it.
In conclusion, despite the development of technology provides us convenience in working, it causes more harm than the benefit. People will end up in getting lazy and spoil their eyes at a young age due to engage electronic devices in their daily life inevitably.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite