many people are spending a lot of money on their weddings. do you think is a good thing?

Nowadays, doing a wedding in a grand way has become
one
of the status parameter. Society has started to judge
one
's richness by the type of wedding
one
chooses to do. The more grand your wedding is, the more impression you will have on the society.
This
growing trend of big fat weddings is a great sign that mankind has started to enjoy every moment of their life. As industrialization and commercialization is increasing, human is getting more and more busy in their work which is somewhat resulting in
poor work life balance
Suggestion
a poor work life balance
. With rare occasions of celebration, it is required to celebrate whatever small or big happiness comes in our way. But in my opinion, it is
also
important to have a complete understanding and planning of
one
's current and future
financials
involving financial matters
financial
needs before we plan a huge investment in leisure activities
such
as wedding.
Wedding
Suggestion
A wedding
is an event where we spend our hard earned money not only on
ourselves but
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ourselves, but
also
on
Suggestion
for
others and most of the time it happen that the guests are not that involved in your happiness and they
also
give bad feedbacks and comment about the food, decor,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
before others.
This
reminds me of an incident where me along with my other friends were attending a wedding. At
one
sight there was the bride, the groom, their family was looking so happy and emotional and on the other
side we
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side, we
saw their few relatives bad mouthing about something they did not like much. We got disappointed to see that your emotions does not equate with the other invitees in the wedding and
hence
, it's better to be considerate about whom you are inviting and how much you are spending.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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