Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others thinks bicycle is better. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Although
, it is believed by some people that travelling by
car
is an ideal
transportation
in a city, other people think that
bicycle
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the bicycle
is more suitable. In my opinion, it
is depend
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depends
on
to
being one more than one
two
kilometers
a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
that how far people
wants
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want
to
travel
and on their age.
Accordingly
, they can choose either
car
or
bicycle
to reach their destination. On the one hand,
car
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the car
is more appropriate because it is very fast and four to five people can
travel
together at
same time
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the same time
.
Car
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The car
also
provides other comforts like air conditioning, heater, comfortable sitting, music and extra space to carry luggage. People who
wants
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want
to
travel
to another city which is approximately 150 km far.
Car
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The car
A car
would be the best options because it will take about 2-3 hours.
On the other hand
, bicycles are more suitable for children who wants to ride school daily. It does not cost for fuel so that it will cheaper than
car
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a car
cars
.
Bicycle
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The bicycle
A bicycle
is very good for
shorter distance
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shorter distances
a shorter distance
and
moreover
, it is good for maintaining good physical health. Most people prefer to use
bicycle
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bicycles
for their
transportation
to
work but
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work, but
it is only convenient for people whose workplace is not too far.
Furthermore
, using
bicycle
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a bicycle
is
also
very good for the environment because it causes no pollution in the air.
Finally
, in my view, both options are mandatory to use for travelling. For adult and older
people
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person's
peoples'
car
will be
best option whereas
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the best option, whereas
the best option whereas
for children and young generation
bicycle
will be perfect. Older people and Adult have to
travel
with their family and kids, so that
car
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the car
gets more priority than other type of
transportation
, whereas kids only have to
travel
to garden and school, so for shorter distance
bicycle
is better and safer. In conclusion, there are different types of
transportation
are
available but
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available, but
using
car
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a car
the car
cars
and or
bicycle
will be depend on the distance to
travel
and person who is driving.

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