Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others thinks bicycle is better. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.
Although
, it is believed by some people that travelling by Linking Words
car
is an ideal Use synonyms
transportation
in a city, other people think that Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bicycle
is more suitable. In my opinion, it Suggestion
the bicycle
is depend
on Suggestion
depends
to
being one more than one
two
kilometers
that how far people a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
wants
to Suggestion
want
travel
and on their age. Use synonyms
Accordingly
, they can choose either Linking Words
car
or Use synonyms
bicycle
to reach their destination.
On the one hand, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
car
is more appropriate because it is very fast and four to five people can Suggestion
the car
travel
together at Use synonyms
same time
. Suggestion
the same time
Use synonyms
Car
Suggestion
The car
also
provides other comforts like air conditioning, heater, comfortable sitting, music and extra space to carry luggage. People who Linking Words
wants
to Suggestion
want
travel
to another city which is approximately 150 km far. Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Car
would be the best options because it will take about 2-3 hours.
Suggestion
The car
A car
On the other hand
, bicycles are more suitable for children who wants to ride school daily. It does not cost for fuel so that it will cheaper than Linking Words
Use synonyms
car
. Suggestion
a car
cars
Use synonyms
Bicycle
is very good for Suggestion
The bicycle
A bicycle
shorter distance
and Suggestion
shorter distances
a shorter distance
moreover
, it is good for maintaining good physical health. Most people prefer to use Linking Words
Use synonyms
bicycle
for their Suggestion
bicycles
transportation
to Use synonyms
work but
it is only convenient for people whose workplace is not too far. Accept comma addition
work, but
Furthermore
, using Linking Words
Use synonyms
bicycle
is Suggestion
a bicycle
also
very good for the environment because it causes no pollution in the air.
Linking Words
Finally
, in my view, both options are mandatory to use for travelling. For adult and older Linking Words
people
Suggestion
person's
peoples'
car
will be Use synonyms
best option whereas
for children and young generation Suggestion
the best option, whereas
the best option whereas
bicycle
will be perfect. Older people and Adult have to Use synonyms
travel
with their family and kids, so that Use synonyms
Use synonyms
car
gets more priority than other type of Suggestion
the car
transportation
, whereas kids only have to Use synonyms
travel
to garden and school, so for shorter distance Use synonyms
bicycle
is better and safer.
In conclusion, there are different types of Use synonyms
transportation
are Use synonyms
available but
using Accept comma addition
available, but
Use synonyms
car
and or Suggestion
a car
the car
cars
bicycle
will be depend on the distance to Use synonyms
travel
and person who is driving.Use synonyms
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.