The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May city in 1950 ( the one on the top) and in present ( the one on the bottom).

The two maps illustrated the distribution of the facilities of the May
city
in 1950
(
Accept space
(
the
one
on the top)  and in the present
(
Accept space
(
the
one
on the bottom).
Firstly
, a man-made lake was created by manually expanding the edges of the
river
along the path between the business district and the government building and constructing the dam in the distant part of the
river
. Business district
also
has developed to the south side of the
river
around the old bridge during the period. The resident community that used to occupy a small area has expanded dramatically by about 10 times in size around the business district and
also
to the south side of the
river
. The old government building was down-sized;
however
, a big new
one
has been built in the south of the
city
. The airport remains in the same location, but its size increased about three times. The traffic roads have developed as well by adding
one
more road with a small bridge which merged with
one
of two major roads before the airport. Overall, the
city
has tremendously developed in its all economic sections in terms of its size of
city
Suggestion
the city
a city
and its population which increased 10 times from 20 thousand in 1950 to 200 thousand nowadays.

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