42. Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is still controversial that at what age, children should start to receive formal training. Some people suggest that early
education will be advocated; while, others support that school
should be started no younger than 7 years old. The essay will discuss both views and my personal opinion that I opine the latter.
To begin
with, people advocate that early
training will benefit children because they are so  innocent just like a piece of blank paper that  it is easy to teach them, shape their  attitudes and nurture better habits for their future lives.
, early
schooling may benefit the children's development and enhance their cognitive capacities as well because their brains remain in the process of growing. Some researches indicate that children who enrolled in kindergartens and received a formal early
schooling did better in their later career paths. 
On the other hand
, some inhabitants advocate that formal
should be carried out when children are 7 years old or older because
kind of education require children's cooperation and commitment. Only children older than 7 years have developed capacity to follow commands and self-control during classes.
, formal
may make students feel restricted, which may discourage students' interests in learning. For younger children, it is tough for them to sit still for 45 minutes to listen teachers' lecturing.
, going to school after 7 years old will help more children.  In conclusion, I personally support that children may benefit more if they enrol in school at an older age like older than 7 years old due to the above reasons.
In addition
, early
childhood is the most precious period for children enjoying their time happily and growing freely. School
for children who are 7 years old or older may contribute to their better development in their
academic training and future careers.

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