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In many countries, plastic bags are one the main sources of damage to the environment, and so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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There is no doubt that our
environment
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 is polluted seriously. There are many countries have forbidden bags made from
plastic
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 because they think those are one of the key factors to the contamination. I strongly agree with that opinion,
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 essay will support my view.
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,
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 bags extremely injured the
environment
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. To clarify,
plastic
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 takes many centuries to be completely dissolved in comparison with other materials, that means those handbags will be maintained into the earth and the sea after discharged for a very long time. A degraded land with tons of
plastic
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 will intercept the growth of plants, that causes many bad effects to animals lived in the land.
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 bags
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 injured the underwater animals,
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, tortoises do not know the
plastic
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 bags and they eat it.
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, poly bags not only damage the
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environment but
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environment, but
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 harm the human health. Many researches point out that
plastic
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 consists of some chemical substances, which can be absorbed by food and cause some bad diseases like cancer. To take one example, a person who usually eats street foods which are packed with
plastic
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 have a higher rate to take cancer than other ones. Bad effects on children’s brain development
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 are witnessed by scientists when they eat food contained those bad substances. In brief,
plastic
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 bag are one of the main reasons that makes
environment
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 become polluted, that
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 cause many bad effects on our health, so it is better to ban the one-time bags or replace that by other materials.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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