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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots, what is your opinion?

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In the current world of mechanisation, robotics play a pivotal role.
Although
 the introduction of artificially intelligent robots aided in several industries as well as commercial operations, illustrating speed and accuracy
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in my opinion jobs demanding cognitive touch will still need to be done by humans.
In addition
 to
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 the cost of operating and maintaining robots is extremely high which again make human workers indispensable in the labour market.On
this
 account, I would like to emphasise that, notwithstanding its predominant functionalities
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there are several job sectors where robots cannot be entrusted with.
Conversely
, jobs that require compassion along with empathy will continue to be done by humans.
For instance
 a patient's diagnosis can only be considered accurate by a medical practitioner post face to face consultation.
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Hence, many
 tasks that necessitate human judgement cannot be replaced by machines though artificially intelligent. Robots are costly due to the initial cost of equipment, installation price, repair and maintenance and need for programming. Calibration is needed to ensure consistent robot operations, which requires human intervention, again claiming to increase the operational expenditure. To sum up, robots are suitable for certain jobs,
however
, they have plenty of limitations too.In my opinion they will never completely replace humans in the workplace.Even though robots have grown smarter, they are found to be futile in areas where human intuition and intelligence is required.Robots can only perform what they are programmed for and cannot evolve through experience unlike humans.
Although
 automation is essential for industrial development, it is burdensome for small scale industries and start ups to deal with the research and development of artificial intelligence or in other word robotics.
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