You want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.In your letter: 1- Explain why you are selling the television. 2-Describe the television. 3- Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

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Dear Sam, I hope you are doing great! The

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time we met, you said that you purchased a play station and wanted to buy a television for it. I'm selling my LCD, hope you are still looking for it. Recently, I have purchased a new LED television for our drawing room and shifted the old one to my bedroom.

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looking to sell off my bedroom's tv. The television is

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32 inches Ultra HD tv with a built-in surround-sound system and

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in warranty period. I know you must be thinking, why am I selling it?

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I am running out of space to store it and extra bucks will help me buy

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theatre system for

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room. I'm sure you will be interested and want to see the condition of the set. So, you can hop in on

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Sunday and see for yourself. I'm hoping to hear from you soon. Cheers, Abhishek.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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156 words

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