1.Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss
It has been argued that to achieve success in life is to get an expensive degree while others believe one can only succeed with hands on experience at work
instead
of tertiary education
. In my opinion depending on occupation each path can be lead to prosperous careers.
To begin
with tertiary education
not only expands student’s knowledge in a particular department but
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department, but
also
introduces them to various other fields which many students are unaware of that have equally lucrative earnings. According to a research, 70% of students changed their majors after first year
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the first year
university
after becoming aware of other higher earning programs. Since students are able to make conscious decision
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conscious decisions
a conscious decision
the conscious decision
education
, they can able to secure a high paid job while having successful careers. Thus
, university
education
is important for number
of professions and exposure to unpopular educational areas.
To the contrary, not every job description requires expensive Suggestion
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the number
university
education
. Vocational training schools which are much shorter and cheaper than universities, have some programs where earnings are significantly higher as oppose to someone with a degree, a great example for this
would be carpenters.Mechanics, and plumbing, are some of the examples where hands on experience is more valuable as opposed to book knowledge. Hence
, it is reasonable to believe that a person can reach same level
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the same level
education
as someone with a degree.
In conclusion, I believe that one must be confident in their field of choice before attending university
due to costly education
. Students must be exposed to various career choices in high school so they can make an informed decision for their future professional life.Submitted by fame8686 on
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