1.Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. Discuss

It has been argued that to achieve success in life is to get an expensive degree while others believe one can only succeed with hands on experience at work

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of tertiary

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. In my opinion depending on occupation each path can be lead to prosperous careers.

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with tertiary

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not only expands student’s knowledge in a particular

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department, but

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introduces them to various other fields which many students are unaware of that have equally lucrative earnings. According to a research, 70% of students changed their majors after

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first year

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the first year

of attending

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after becoming aware of other higher earning programs. Since students are able to make

conscious decision

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conscious decisions

a conscious decision

the conscious decision

after their

education

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, they can able to secure a high paid job while having successful careers.

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,

university

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education

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is important for

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the number

of professions and exposure to unpopular educational areas. To the contrary, not every job description requires expensive

university

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education

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. Vocational training schools which are much shorter and cheaper than universities, have some programs where earnings are significantly higher as oppose to someone with a degree, a great example for

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would be carpenters.Mechanics, and plumbing, are some of the examples where hands on experience is more valuable as opposed to book knowledge.

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, it is reasonable to believe that a person can reach

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the same level

of achievement without higher

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as someone with a degree. In conclusion, I believe that one must be confident in their field of choice before attending

university

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due to costly

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. Students must be exposed to various career choices in high school so they can make an informed decision for their future professional life.