In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one’s own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative development?

Exploring the roots of
individual family
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individual, family
lineage has become a common trend in few parts of the
world
. In my opinion,
this
is a very constructive approach as it helps to investigate the family legacy,
belief
and values which
further
leads to understand its impact on
one’s family and in
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one’s family and
the
society
.
Now a days
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Nowadays
, many countries studying their family lineage which helps them to recognize family traditions, heritage, beliefs and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
.
This
is a very affirmative approach because
this
leads individuals
to get
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get
the answer of “why are they like
this
”,
in other
words why
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words, why
do they behave
in
particular way
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a particular way
, why do they
value
; what they
value
. Why do they follow what they
belief
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believe
believed
?
This
is all
about understand
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about, understand
one
’s family
belief
system
, values and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
and how all these impact individuals within the family.
For example
, monotheism is widely believed in Pakistani
society
,
this
is the reason there are very few temples in Pakistan as
majority
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the majority
believe in
one
God, and they discourage believing in many gods.
Further
, they
value
Islamic traditions and values and
this
is significantly conspicuous in
patriarchy family
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the patriarchal family system
patriarchal family system
system
. Understanding
one
’s family history helps to preserve family culture and remain with its unique identity in the
world
as there are about 16000 different people groups in the
world
with different traditions, languages and ethnic values. The family beliefs and tradition have a huge influence within the family and in
society
. Dominant family
belief
systems build
society
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society, belief
belief
, values and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
. It is visible through the people
belief
practices, religious buildings and learning
centers
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
, and public
education
system
.
Such
as, in Pakistani public
education
system
is dominantly designed on Islamic teachings and traditions, namely, Islamiat, Urdu, Pakistan studies and social studies subject.
This
kind of examples
lead
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leads
one
to think and find out the history of
one
’s
education
system
.
Also
,
education
system
shapes pupils
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shapes, pupils
thinking. Another example of
belief
and
value
is, good works
leads
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lead
to the path of salvation. Those societies which
follows
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follow
Islam believe that
path
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the path
to heaven is through the weighs of their good works. Muslim people
value
helping others and earn merits to heaven. As
one
understands his/her family accounts and its impact
in
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on
the
society
, start appreciating family inheritance and become enthusiastic to continue it, secure it and make sure to pass it to
next generation
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the next generation
.
This
common trend of examining
one
’s family account is becoming common in many countries of the
world
.
Also
,
this
is
optimistic approach
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an optimistic approach
to understand
one
’s family chronicles and existing
system
within the family
for instance
belief
system
, values and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
.
This
help
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helps
one
to understand
society
beliefs, values and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
and its influence in the
society
. We cannot separate family and
society
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society, although
although
both are separate
units but
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units, but
because its individuals belong to both cells their impacts
is
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are
unavoidable.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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