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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, Thank him/her for the invitation Explain why you can not come Ask him about other times to visit

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Dear Andrii! Thanks so much for the invitation to your party. I am a great lover of
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countryside resorts, especially when they have a variety of entertainment possibilities. Unfortunately, it won’t be possible for me to come
in
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 the beginning of July to join in. You know that I was running a few projects during the
last
 three months and sadly one of them meets a deadline
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 the end
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 July.
That is
 the main reason for me to work all hours now to finish my project on time, and that’s why I really have no chance to take even one day off work to join you and your friends for the celebration. In any
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 I wish you a great time at your party. I am sure that
next
 time would be
more lucky
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 for me to visit you and I will do it with great pleasure. With hope to see you soon! Paul

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