Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well‐educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement

By the advance of technology and the advent of

television

, some include

television

as the main reason for being less well educated among students. They

also

argue that

television

cannot assume as an educational tool and couldn’t be a substitute for books.

Although

I do not completely disagree with

this

idea, I believe there are some points need to be put forward about

this

which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs. All around the world children spend a great amount of

time

in front of the

television

set watching numerous programs which are mostly

has

Suggestion

having

produced just for entertainment them. According to psychological research were published, dedicating proper

time

for recreation is necessary for children and even adult which a part of

this

time

could be allocated for watching

television

. Overly watching

television

could lead to not only educational

drop but

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drop, but

also

obesity and related disease

such

as diabetes,

therefore

it should be under control. Since children are not able to schedule for their leisure

time so

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time, so

they might end up watching tv more than they should, parents are responsible to be sure that their children are spending appropriate

time

watching

television

.

Thus

, assuming children are less educated today, parents should be blamed, not

television

. The other focus point is that though

television

or any other tech couldn’t and should not be considered as a substitute for books, some programs with educational purpose could be produced. In my opinion, it totally depends on us to how to use technologies to be less destructive and be more beneficial and

television

is not an exception. In conclusion, in our modern world with novel technologies and entertainments including

television it’s

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television, it’s

hard to concentrate on the main aspects of life like education, family, exercising and etc., especially for children.

Therefore

, parents should make sure that their children watch

television

only at times they have planned for them.