When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It has been argued by some portion of people that huge shopping malls needs to be replaced by sports ground or amusement parks while planning a city. I completely agree with the given suggestion because having refreshment and beneficial place rather than concrete walls will not only pleasant for public but for society as a whole.

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of the concrete jungle. It is unquestionable that in big cities where people are living with stress and depression, naturally build park can work as a health buster.

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a person can rejuvenate his/her self after having a hectic day by just sitting on a park-bench with family.

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inhaling some fresh air is way more advantageous than spending dollars in shopping malls on unnecessary stuff.

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to that, children may play outdoor games, which will boost positive energy and increase the strength of their bones.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

2 paragraphs

164 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban planning
recreational infrastructure
community cohesion
sustainable development
green space
land use
civic amenities
quality of life
sedentary lifestyle
economic stimulus
pollution mitigation
environmental benefits
cultural enrichment
mental well-being
commercial viability
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